Academic Discussion
·Genetic Engineering in Agriculture
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The response addresses the topic of GMOs but lacks depth and specificity in its arguments.
Lack of specific examplesCritical
“They could potentially raise mortality rate in the general population by causing mysterious adverse effects.”
Fix·Provide specific studies or examples that illustrate potential health risks associated with GMOs.
Vague conclusionModerate
“Overally, use of GMOs is controversial and we should focus more research toiwards traditional ways.”
Fix·Conclude with a more specific recommendation or a summary of key points discussed.
“we are not certain about the long term side effects of these synthetic seeds”
This demonstrates awareness of the complexity and potential risks associated with GMOs, which is important for a balanced discussion.
“artificial seeds are also controlled by by big firms and they control the prices in a very unethical way”
Highlighting ethical concerns adds depth to the argument and shows consideration of broader societal impacts.
“On the other hand student 1 expressed a valid point that it can produce high yield”
Recognizing opposing viewpoints demonstrates engagement with the discussion and a willingness to consider multiple perspectives.
Vocabulary & Flow
Continue using transitional phrases to improve the flow of ideas.
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Incorporate specific evidence or examples to support claims.
Now: They could potentially raise mortality rate in the general population by causing mysterious adverse effects.
Try: Studies have shown that certain GMOs can lead to health issues, such as allergies or resistance to antibiotics.
Providing concrete evidence will strengthen arguments and improve the score.Correct spelling errors to improve clarity.
Where: body
Try: environmental destruction
Use varied vocabulary to avoid repetition.
Try: Instead of 'big firms', use 'large corporations' or 'major companies'.