Academic Discussion
·Climate Change Action
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Key Takeaway
The response articulates a relevant opinion on government regulations for climate change but lacks depth and specificity in examples.
Grammatical errors affecting clarityCritical
“Govermental laws and regulation is basic point for any changes and final approach due to fast environmental changes.”
Fix·Governmental laws and regulations are the basic points for any changes and final approaches due to rapid environmental changes.
Lack of specific examplesModerate
“For example, recently, via broadcasting we were facing with horrible fire of flood in many places on the globe.”
Fix·Provide specific examples of recent environmental events, such as the Australian bushfires or the floods in Germany, to strengthen the argument.
“This question is specific and not not easy to answer at the first glance.”
Acknowledging the complexity of the topic shows an understanding of the nuanced nature of climate change action, which is important for demonstrating critical thinking.
“Govermental laws and regulation is basic point for any changes and final approach due to fast environmental changes.”
This statement clearly supports the idea that government intervention is crucial, which is a relevant stance in the context of the discussion.
“For example, recently, via broadcasting we were facing with horrible fire of flood in many places on the globe.”
Mentioning recent environmental events provides context and relevance to the argument, indicating awareness of current global issues.
Vocabulary & Flow
Incorporate more transitional phrases to improve the flow and coherence of the response.
Grammar Corrections
1 items foundCorrect preposition usage and plural forms
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Improvement Roadmap
Incorporate specific examples to support arguments.
Now: For example, recently, via broadcasting we were facing with horrible fire of flood in many places on the globe.
Try: For instance, the Australian bushfires in 2020 caused widespread devastation.
Adding specific examples will make arguments more compelling and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.Correct grammatical errors to improve clarity.
Where: throughout
Try: Governmental laws and regulations are the basic points for any changes.
Use varied vocabulary to enhance expression.
Try: Instead of 'regulation', consider using 'policies' or 'rules'.